In my mind I find that the first passage creates a more intricate image in my mind. This is due to the multiple things the piece is described by. One exmple of the intricate imagery would be "Spitballs stuck to the ceiling. Paper planes whizzed through the air." (exert#1)This creates the image right away in my mind of a somewhat dimly lit room with lack of adult supervision, with many, many younger children than myself, misbehaving with paper utensils of destruction. This is also sort of nostalgic because the 1st grade class next to mine when I was 6 had terrible behaving children, and one week, the teacher did not come due to family reasons, and they had sub for the week. They never shouted again.
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